redwolf: (typewriter)
redwolf ([personal profile] redwolf) wrote in [personal profile] moonbeamsfanfic 2006-07-13 10:40 am (UTC)

Nice to see you writing again.

took his mouth in a kiss — I think it's missing an in, some editing artefact has gone awry.

" I seem to remember you falling asleep — bonus space before the quote.

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